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bslicker
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0 posted 2001-01-29 01:26 PM


You Are

You are beautiful,
You are wonderful,
You are delightful,
You are lovable,
(That's why)
You are unforgetable.



© Copyright 2001 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-29 01:31 PM


Welcome to Passions!  We hope you take time to relax, read some exceptional poetry, enjoy responding, and making new poet friends!  And check your e-mail for a special message!
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2 posted 2001-01-29 01:36 PM


beautiful....I hope you will find being here a pleasure...Welcome....enjoyed these words..




Greeneyes~



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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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bslicker
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3 posted 2001-01-29 02:38 PM


Sunshine and Greeneyes
Thank for the welcome.
I have already notice there is alot of exceptional poetry here, and i hope that i can contribute also.

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4 posted 2001-01-29 03:41 PM


Short poems are my favorite even though I have written long ones myself.  "You Are" really great!  I love your poem.
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5 posted 2001-01-29 03:49 PM


Nice to be appreciated....James
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6 posted 2001-01-29 06:47 PM


welcome!!  Pull up a chair, a nice cup of your favorite beverage. . . and prepare to be amazed. . . just like I am. . .

I like this one. . .reminds me a little of cummings (he's always been one of my fav's!!)

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-01-29 07:03 PM


Nice intoductory to Passions....welcome to Passions and I hope you make friends and continue to post...one love and peace!

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-01-29 07:05 PM


..... thank you!........  
CD
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9 posted 2001-01-29 07:34 PM


This is probably the second or third time I have read your poem.  It is just so great!!!!!!!!!

Thanks

CD

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10 posted 2001-01-29 07:37 PM


VEry nice, and welcome!  This would be a great one for an autograph book.  Are you old enough to remember those?
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11 posted 2001-01-29 08:00 PM


Simply put..
Simply powerful..
Simply Beautiful..
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Simply Unforgettable

Welcome to our Passions family  


~Sheri

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left by those who got there first"



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12 posted 2001-01-29 08:14 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS.  Nice way to start your journey with us.  So much said in so few words.  Look forward to more from you.
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Welcome!   I enjoyed this very much   -SEA
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Welcome aboard! I hope you enjoy your time here.

" I have seen without perceiving
I have been another man
Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold,

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15 posted 2001-01-30 08:49 AM


CD  Thanks so very much  X   2

James  YW i have been reading poetry here for about a month and it took me some time to post.

Sven  ty and favorite beverage is coffee and my screen to read.

Nate Dogg  ty for the welcome

doreen peri  yw and ty i have read some of your pieces so i also need to ty.

VAS  ty and i do remeber autograph books...Probably could dig one out if i looked hard enough....lol

Irie  TY  for the welcome and simply put.

Mark ty for the welcome

Sea  ty and glad u could enjoy

EagleOne TY

Once again Thank You all for the Warm Welcome, and you very nice replies.........
Hope my special lady reads this also.

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16 posted 2001-01-30 10:39 AM


welcome to passions nice poem
bslicker
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17 posted 2001-01-30 03:39 PM


Welcome, short and to the point.
I like,,,,, thank you.
bernie


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18 posted 2001-01-30 04:32 PM


This is very very lovely!

Kathleen



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19 posted 2001-01-30 05:30 PM


i agree, short and sweet, very nice
bslicker
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20 posted 2001-01-30 09:08 PM


I have to ditto CD..... I have read this at least a half a dozen times.

Bernie


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21 posted 2001-01-31 12:25 PM


bslicker ty glad u enjoyed it, X how ever many times you have read.

irish rose and jellybean,

ty i am glad u liked it.


Once again Thank You all, your response has just been fantastic... Thank you all.  More to come as I continue to read and write.
jsom

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22 posted 2001-02-04 02:58 PM


Hi Justsomeofme,

This is great and I welcome you to Passions, I hope you are enjoying yourself.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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