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Haiku [well, OK, another Snoku]
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Haiku [well, OK, another Snoku] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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softly silent scene drifting white to cover gray snowglobe lives today |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Good one, enjoyed. *L* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Sunshine, this one is soooo sweet... I loved it... Thank you ~coco~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, snowglobe lives! write on! Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now. . . shake it up!!!  wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I like it, I like it, I like it! To compare the outdoors to a snow globe, love it. Do you feel rather shaken? ;o} |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You know if you swirl it as you shake it then the whole world becomes dizzy instead of just the one hair color......or is it that they stop being dizzy and the rest of the world gets that way........oh who knows......stop swirling the darn thing so I can think. ============================================ Lovely thoughts and nice to see that the snow is still around. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ got snow here.......1 ft. and a light dusting this morning......power was out for 3 days........still, it's so beautiful.  -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Break this snowglobe, i want out into warmth and lots of Sunshine  Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Karilea! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Love that "drifting white to cover gray". If only we didn't have to go out in it! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the Snoku....makes me smile. Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, you know I love this don't you. I'm taking your advice and not replying until I've read something several times. Much as I like to be the first when I read your beauties. So this reply is further down the list but I have read it oddles of times. It is truly utterly wonderful piece from you love. And yes I love it. Isn't it a good thing there are no limits on how many Kari poems I can keep. Take care love as always Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed the read...i guess it sounds lame but then, i liked this enough to give it a bump |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I really enjoy snoku...... Bob <>< |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
heh heh heh I love the response: "shake it up" I think that's what fell from our skies this morning, snowglobe snow It looked alot like the white pellets that come in potting soil, only much smaller, like 1/10 the size and zillions of em! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all for enjoying this little favorite of mine with me...and Kaile? any thank you is ALWAYS appreciated.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
If you were sitting where I am right now you'd know for sure that the snowglobe exists today....this is great work I always marvel at the poets here that write in this style. The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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