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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-01-29 09:30 AM


Rewrite

The Opiate Titillate

Cornucopias horn is full
Three proverbial bags of wool
One to pay the lions aim
One to stay the power game
One to gay the people tame.

Lions with an Omni lust
Drain cornucopia bust
Thirst upon the fate of war
Always preach the evermore
Lions eat their fill in raw.

Futilities disparity
There is no coming charity
The lions maw is the core
Feeds behind a fabled door
Doling morphine evermore.

Pendenting all of pleasure
Shovels time to a measure
Rides apocalypse as friend
Tossing out the coins of mend
Promising a fabled end.

For evermore the opiate
Is evermore of prussiate.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-29 10:02 AM


OK, first one to admit, and willingly, that I had to pull the dictionary out for this one....

and now that I've done that....

all I can say is....

wow....

and I thought MY mind traveled around....

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-01-29 10:18 AM


Just what I needed!  More titillating by opiates....lol

You, my friend, are a reliable smile!

RobertB
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3 posted 2001-01-29 10:42 AM


very cool and I love the title
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-01-29 02:12 PM


Futilities disparity
There is no coming charity
The lions maw is the core
Feeds behind a fabled door
Doling morphine evermore.

Pendenting all of pleasure
Shovels time to a measure
Rides apocalypse as friend
Tossing out the coins of mend
Promising a fabled end.

For evermore the opiate
Is evermore of prussiate.

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consider me ... sufficiently...
opiated and titillated ...
and by your coolness of vocabulary ...
I am also satiated.

*winkiewinkie* "First Rate" Stinky  

Kethry
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5 posted 2001-01-29 02:16 PM


Sy,
titillating write, it's a good thing words are NOT the opiate of the mind.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-01-29 07:02 PM


Karilea,
Thanks so much for the WOW. *L*

Serenity,
Always liked to make people smile.

Robert,
Thanks for the cool.

JM,
Ok I consider everything you said.
Winkiewinkie Love Ya

Kethry,
Cute comment, thank you.

Sven
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7 posted 2001-01-29 08:07 PM


I've a question. . . if words are not the opiate of the mind. . . what is???

Great one Sy. . .

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Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-01-29 09:58 PM


Sven,
Thank you Sven and as to your question.
The opiate of the mind is LOVE.

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