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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Drink away your thoughs untill your blue in the face Turn your face up and unfill your heart Try not you worry I'll be there to take the fall....to wash away those tears of joy... Those promised enemies only animated thoughts SOON Faded like a pictured Memory Don't Forget to Smile Hmm..that same old song doesn't have the meaning that it used to Those simplified words don't play that part Does it? Pull me back FROM this life less ordinary Let it slide of your back like the water you used to wash away that sinful happiness Oh, yeah Don't forget to smile Mimic my being, with warped d is torted images. As I sit so silently near. Look out that window pa..i.. ne. and watch each picture fade. [This message has been edited by BirdeeB (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say that these thoughts aren't that simple. . . this is excellent. . . I really like that way that you used the form and the breaking up of the words to convey your message. . . well done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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