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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-01-29 08:56 AM


Football Dislikes Me


I can't see the ball for the bodies that fall
upon it and cover what cameras can't show.
To follow the movements,  I couldn't at all.
Football dislikes me, my eyes are too slow.

Last night I found myself watching THE GAME
explaining to sister in law all that was termed.
I screamed as I called out each players name...
As downs became firsts and the goals were confirmed.

How funny that finally I understand
for years what I hated, when watching with him.
Football, Go Ravens, you've taken command.
I think the dislike now was only a whim....
~~~~~

Seriously I enjoyed it so much last night...
was surprised that I even remembered what
all the plays meant...I couldn't wait to catch the second half
on the radio on my ride home...and of course being born in Baltimore...well

~smiling

Wynter  writing just a silly poem




"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-01-29 08:59 AM


Nakd,
Nice write, enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-01-29 09:15 AM


Sy...was just  having a thought about  football...and really how much I enjoyed it last night, hated the commentators  but enjoyed  the game.

thanks *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Victoria
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3 posted 2001-01-29 09:48 AM


I dont know a thing about football..and I dont care to know haa...I have a mental block when it comes to it haa...I like other sports though..glad you had a good time HUGS

                ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-01-29 08:45 PM


Wynter - even if it was a silly one, I still read it. And found it to be, quite silly!!!!

BC


nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-01-29 11:50 PM


~V~ and Bill...yes it was a silly  write  but I am so glad I finally learned to enjoy one game of football in my lifetime....haaaaa

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



kcsgrandma
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6 posted 2001-01-30 12:38 PM


Wynter, I think it still dislikes me, very much, in fact, but now you show me maybe there's hope.   At least this once it made me smile.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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7 posted 2001-01-30 12:40 PM


I loved this...I was always a football fan, though...but as a SAINTS football fan...the title particularly amused me...would love to watch a game with you, you'd laugh a LOT...I go completely nuts.  And?  Sports bars are a lot of fun...too...I was the only woman one night and they loved me once they knew I knew what a nickel defense was...*wink*
Kethry
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8 posted 2001-01-31 07:20 AM


Wynter,
I enjoyed this poem. even if I have no idea what you're talking about. The only thing I know is it seems a lot of fuss for twenty five cents (get the quarter back)*wink wink*
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-01-31 10:35 AM


My entire family is sports-crazy and me?
I just go to my home-office and write poetry!!!

Kathleen



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