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Lady Sea |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Lady Sea By Richard Maxfield 1-29-2001 As rain falls Cold wind whips at my flesh In the darkness I hear the bells of the buoys Waves are bad again Never ending restlessly tossing Lights from the shore Slowly fading into the darkness Smoke from the diesels Filling my nostrils Taste of salt On my lips once more Mist in my face I turn her into the wind She bucks the swells And moans in discontent It’s a three-hour run To my secret place Where once again I’ll try lady luck Catch my fill Head home a winner All to start again Before tomorrow breaks I ask myself why Saying I should quit But then my lady Sea Beckons me back Live like there is a tomorrow. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
the sea is a wild mistress......helen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
fresh images and I felt the mist! Kathleen |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Lady and Irish for your comments. Love and light, Richard |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Lady Sea is a temptress in the islands. I loved this well expressed concept and always your style.  Koko Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank You KoKo for your comment. Love and light, Richard |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ahhhhh yes,  the SEA gets them every time  Beautifully vivid...wonderfully done -SEA |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you my lady sea. LOL Love and light, Richard |
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