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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-01-28 11:02 PM





lightning memory
one great flash across the sky
then it's all over


{senryu}
EEEEEK!



Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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1 posted 2001-01-29 12:46 PM


Cute Koko...a life span shorter than the may fly.
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2 posted 2001-01-29 05:45 PM


oh not that fast please.... love it  

((hugs))
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3 posted 2001-02-20 08:43 PM


i like this one: both the literal and the metaphorical interpretation...

back to the top this goes

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4 posted 2001-02-20 09:04 PM


that must be the way 2001 is going
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