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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-01-28 09:17 PM


I have lost the key
to the safe inside of me
holding sanity



[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-28-2001).]

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-28 09:27 PM


Me too!  
doreen peri
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2 posted 2001-01-28 09:27 PM


yeah, me, too, but nobody will believe me  

BRAVO! on this one... nicely done

2dalimit
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3 posted 2001-01-28 10:00 PM


I know what you mean. THEY took my key too. I know they did. I know they did.
Good one.
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4 posted 2001-01-28 10:28 PM


My kids have that key of mine...... Every once in a while, my parents ( when they babysit) get it back for me!   -SEA
Paula Finn
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5 posted 2001-01-28 11:10 PM


Keys? You mean there are KEYS? naahhhhhh really? Here all this time I thought LOL well nevermind what I thought heheehe
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2001-01-28 11:16 PM


Paula stole my line...lol...I didn't get the memo either....but hey...??? as long as it's "safe"...grin again m'friend....
kcsgrandma
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7 posted 2001-01-29 12:54 PM


Very cute.  I don't think I ever had custody of my key.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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8 posted 2001-01-29 12:56 PM


Wow, is that a powerful senyru.  I think I've lost that key a time or two, too.
Sunshine
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9 posted 2001-01-29 03:45 PM




Insanity, see?
poetry then be the key
safely opens me

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10 posted 2001-01-29 03:56 PM


oh my...where have I put mine.....love it  

((hugs))
Charisma

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11 posted 2001-02-20 08:46 PM


this one deserves another spin of comments and may i add that this is my favourite senryu i have read from you so far....


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12 posted 2001-02-20 09:00 PM


This is fantastic! I think it says a whole lot more than just what's on the surface. Well done! Powerful!
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