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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-01-28 06:48 PM


Sapphiric Flame

Between us is the sapphiric Flame,
enveloping and rising higher as we steer-
vessels, of the Soul, our eternal name
ministering our part, in this, our sphere.
holding visions to roam, dreams clear
in the heart of love, to ever combine
ruling the hand of Thought to design
illumination, art, from bending light,
spreading the flame, forever, to shine
a oneness, in time, bold and bright


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"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe





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1 posted 2001-01-28 06:51 PM


This....is wonderful....and is now in my library....
Thank you!

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2 posted 2001-01-28 06:56 PM


PoeMinister~
How very lovely.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-01-28 08:18 PM


Sunshine--
     Thank you for reading and the  
     honor in the knowing its been
     placed in your library.  
Marge--
     Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed.

take care,
Poeminister

SEA
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4 posted 2001-01-28 10:37 PM


Oh.....I like this SO much!   -SEA
Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-01-28 10:48 PM


SEA--  
   Thank you.  Glad you liked.


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Paula Finn
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6 posted 2001-01-28 11:19 PM


This is very lovely...dreamlike...I like it lots
Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-01-29 12:02 PM


Paula--  
   Thank you.  It was my first Dizain.


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Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-02-22 09:54 PM


Revised:


Sapphiric Flame

Between us is the Sapphiric Flame,
enveloping and rising higher as we steer-
vessels of the Soul, our eternal name,
putting quill to scroll, in this, our sphere
with visions in which to roam, dreams clear
in the heart of love ever to combine
our hands of thought to weave and design
illumination - art, from stretching light,
spreading the Flame, forever to shine
a oneness, in time, bold and bright



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CocoBaci
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9 posted 2001-02-24 06:31 PM


Oh POE, this is sooooo goregous...
I'm keeping this one sweetie it's a jewel...
And btw I've read your revision and that is a sweet treat of a read too...
Your poem just left me with smiles and I thank you for the delightful read
~coco~

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-02-24 06:45 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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11 posted 2001-02-24 08:15 PM


loved reading these wonderful piece.
excellent as always my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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12 posted 2001-02-24 08:17 PM


Beautifully done!
Thank you for writing this!


~*Peachy Be*~

Irish Rose
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13 posted 2001-02-25 01:18 AM


I like both versions!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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Poeminister
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14 posted 2001-02-26 12:35 PM


Coco--
Thank you so much for enjoying
this and your comments.

James--
Glad you liked. Thanks for peeking in.

Charisma--
Thanks for reading and most of
all loving it.

Voiceless--
Appreciate your stopping by to read.
Glad to know you enjoyed.

Kathleen--
Thank you for reading.

take care,
Poeminister






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Cerenity
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15 posted 2001-02-26 09:44 AM


Hi Poeminister,

These I loved and if you would not mind could you tell me what form is Dizain I tried to find it but was unable, very much enjoyed the reading.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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