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D'e J`a Vu ................... ( for Sunshine )

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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


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D'e  J`a  Vu
~~~


Again  the  ancient  door  creaks  and  groans
pushing  back
the  dust  of  ages
stirred  constantly  through  time  immortal
~
Past  swirling  fog
a  distant  light  erupts  with  deafening
twisting  truths
~
Solid  ground  shatters  beneath  my  feet
then  I  hover  ...  helplessly
above  a  hideous
boiling  maelstrom
~
The  voice  of  truth  explodes  from  above
my  every  sin  a  shock-wave that  drives  me  down
~
I  lift  my  legs  to  avoid  the  searing  pain
but  nauseously  blistered  hands
take  hold
and  drag  me  within  the  churning  inferno
~
With  blinding  spin  and  uncontrollable  suction
the  swirling  current  takes  me
and  my  scream  is  but  a  gurgle
~
Unconsciousness  welcome  but  never  met
the  searing  pain  still  rising  yet
each  fibre  ripped  apart  to  molecular  particle
~
Riding  the  vortex  of  purification
~
Separating  sins  from  soul
~
Till  finally
~
I'm  cast  out  the  tail
and  caught  by  the  uterine  web
with  the  voice  of  truth still  taunting
~

" Better  Luck  This  Time "
~~~


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Listening to every heart


1 posted 01-28-2001 05:28 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Oh Yes! Yes! I remember this!  Thank you SO much for bringing it back...not at all like mine....and yet...

haunting!
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I really like this one dad!
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