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Sonnet I |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sonnet I to catch, without entangling, a string to cache a line, a beam of light to bring to you, here, and in the now of moment for thoughts of you have been lent a calm becalmed, warmth of soul, a sigh lies within these thoughts of you and I serene, seen upon the scene of to come believing to know that you are "the one" to see in shadows of yester's night to what will be seen in morning's light a belief of reverie, in this the you of me to hear my name on your lips, you see… to hold as a token, a cachet of belief one day to breath in sweet, sweet relief 01.28.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Karilea ...this is absolutely lovely  [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I echo Rex..lovely writing Sunshine.. HUGS~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
very nice... enjoyed muchly... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rex, Victoria, Mike...I'm at a loss...thank you all... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm at a loss too Sunshine. . . *sigh*. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow that's excellent! Should be published! Read it to the world dear lady read it loud! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Beautiful writing, my friend. The Sonnet is obviously a good style for you. Can't wait to see Sonnet 3,857,328,478,347,837 and all the ones inbetween! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, I saved reading this until after the challenge for obvious reasons love. Because I didn't want to be discouraged too much. Knowing that you did such a splendid job love, and it is too. In fact it is utterly utterly superb, which is why you are the mentor and I'm the (what would that me the mentaled) no it know it's the junior student. This is as always stunning and you knew I'd love it. Take care love Majestic Marsha   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Again my friends, thank you all...but apparently I've still a lot to learn about sonnets...and I promise, the next time I attempt to post one...ALL of the rules will be followed... so for now...this is just a poem... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have yet to attempt a serious one, myself!!!!! Kathleen |
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