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I Walk the Shore
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I Walk the Shore |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I Walk The shore I walk along the sandy shore absorbing serenic splendor with a bird on my shoulder really I do At night I once met a ghost a misty maiden at the coast and she and I danced Oh yes, it's true In a breeze she came over me we took to the stirring sea- waltzed waves of ecstacy- A sweet moment All under the moon's rays cast out of a full phase; but night loosened embrace then she went I swam back in tears my thoughts full of fears my heart put to drears aching and sore I may never again her see but still I wait patiently; 'til my soul again is free I walk the shore Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...how very lovely this is... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ 'In a breeze she came over me we took to the stirring sea- waltzed waves of ecstacy- A sweet moment' A sweeter thought, could not be found Ecstacy falls, in soft surround~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh my Poe, I went and pasted what I adored so much and then I find sweet Marge picked same lines  oh well This is a lovely poem and I enjoyed the read very much... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
with all my heart, I believe you do. |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
enjoyed this one, beautiful, AP |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Straight into my library.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gorgeous...actually made me feel a bit--balmy...smiles... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
How could this not be true how could I not belive in you I was there.......within the mist dancing ~ swaying......gently kissed now waiting ~ wanting......hoping to see you on the beaches ~ waiting for me ~SEA~ I LOVE THIS! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
At night I once met a ghost a misty maiden at the coast and she and I danced Oh yes, it's true In a breeze she came over me we took to the stirring sea- waltzed waves of ecstacy- A sweet moment All under the moon's rays cast out of a full phase; but night loosened embrace then she went ==================== superb imagery in this write of longing and passion wonderful expression way cool poetry If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
poeminister, lovely images, lovely write. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Ahhhh, very nice. I liked this very much. It deserves to be read again... and again... and yet again. Sandi |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've felt this way before. . . excellent my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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