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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Solid ground hidden deep within the snow is the place where flowers grow hope spread on stone cold ground is the place where seeds are found some will die before their day nature will carry them away yet are saved a lucky few bringing pleasure to renew as the ice begins to melt new life now can be felt magical powers changing it's form transformed by the touch of warm enchanting gardens you prepare no other beauty can compare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
slick, The promise of the coming season . . . especially spring. Lived in the subtropics for a time . . . such wimpy seasons! But tell me, "yet are saved a lucky few, balancing pleasure as they grew"? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
kraw ...ok ok ok changed it happy now? roflmao helen |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very well done Helen, Makes me long for spring. Nice flow and thoughts Rich |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I enjoyed the read and I compliment you on a splendid write Slick1... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Happy now  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superb, tender, caressing! Enjoyed every syllable! |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
So full with hope and renewal. Enjoyed it greatly. Don |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really liked this one. The feel of it was great. Wonderful writing. Love and light, Richard |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank you all soooooooooooooo glad you liked. helen |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
this one's actually producing a warm feeling....anticipating spring... and of course spring break. but that's something else. enjoyed the hope in these words. beautifully painted picture. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Lovely thoughts breaking through the thaw... a pleasure to read, Helen. Robert Joseph |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's coming and all will enjoy...but hey this is a great little poem! I enjoyed the thoughts very much! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very very nice...I enjoyed much |
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