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Mistaken Idenitity |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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A corner café, Wednesday, another day of the week, sitting and sipping, day dreaming, head singing, not thinking, finger tapping music on the side of my cup, languishing in bluesie bliss, oblivious until you pulled out a chair. Invaded my space, turned bluesie to blue, started my heart, opened my drunk sleeping eyes. Paste my face on a carton of milk, label me lost, whereabouts unknown, last seen with a woman, she looked like you; give me a pill to wipe away my tears, help me to sleep, deeper than deep, play me the blues, croon me a song lower than low… ah but I see it was all a mistake, that's really not you and this isn't me, it's just a case of mistaken identity. w. james beard, jr. © January 2001 [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
j, Like the way this works, builds nicely then cracks open. And well painted scenes, too. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sing it Jimmy...this is just OH SO perfect...great write |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is great... I'm enjoying these poems of song  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
A great poem, I liked it very much, AP |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good read, James.... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thank you my friends for the read and kind words... jwesley |
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