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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Can love be everlasting? In this endless passive sea Can we overcome the madness? Of this endless revelry Our craves are never-ending Perpetual our needs All bleeding hearts contending For the heightened ecstasy We’ve an un-denying passion For a closeness of our own Swimming through this ocean Try to find a way to home Where love is always waiting When I wake and go to sleep There to mend my broken pieces Lift me when I’m feeling weak Can love be everlasting? Become all that I have dreamed Eternal and unmasking Free and wild as it should be. [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
There are many faces of love...and yes, one is everlasting. Pray that you find it, spiked. I truly enjoyed this piece, finely woven. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Yes, it can, and I hope you find it. I enjoyed reading this. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
how peculiar...a question that has been on my mind too...and? I just give up. Dorothy Surrenders. Taking toto, and going back to kansas... A beautiful write and some deep thoughts, rich... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
When reading your poem I felt such intensity behind the words you write... And I gotta tell ya Spiked, I believe in love everlasting and my outlook on life is that the journeys I've travelled will one day lead to that one path where forevermore true love shall last; it's just those darn journeys seem endless and at times can get one frazzled if ya know what I mean  Enjoyed this read thank you |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all so very much. Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*bump* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rich~ I know it can........ -SEA |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
good question...... ......beautiful thoughts |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Ty Serene  Sea Hope so Doreen not really a question of can it be, but should really ask will it be. To have been blessed once in a lifetime with love is great, to be blessed more than once is a wonder [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-31-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It should be free and wild  "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
True Kathleen Thanks Rich |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Positively. |
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