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Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

0 posted 2001-01-27 11:17 PM

A faint melody breathes
From behind a stormy silhouette,
Pushing iridescent light
Forward
Through the forsaken cloud of grief
Clinging inside me.

A voice flies with that song,
Sweeping through my dreams
With tender grace and power,
Bringing rose tinted whispers
Along with the stunning reality
Of a growing love.

I see your eyes through the dark,
Sparkling, reflecting your soul
In soft, quiet splendor...
And when you kiss me
The moments swirl wildly
With my dazed rapture.

Every time you touch me
I know you believe in me
And in us...
So when your shadow’s drape
In shreds of sorrow
Know that I will stand behind you
Breathing the lilting melody
That you once sang for me.

~*For you Abrahm, for you are all this to me and so much more.  Thank you for your love and for being here for me*~

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

Dusk Treader

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Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

1 posted 2001-01-27 11:48 PM

You are so incredibly sweet! Great poem, my dear. I love you so very much

I'm pulling myself up and then we can sing that faint melody together.

Abrahm Simons

"It doesn't matter if we turn to dust
Turn and turn and turn we must
I guess I'll see you dancing in the ruins" - Blue Oyster Cult

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-01-27 11:50 PM

Krista~

You write of devoted love, and of it's saving grace during dark times so beautifully! But, then again, I've come to expect no less from your talented pen. Abrahm will love this! Amazing imagery and sentiment

The ending touched me, what a pledge! If only I could find love like this~

Take care,
Melissa< !signature-->

Hey!!! Abrahm snuck in on me

Well, I guess we already know that he loves this

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-27-2001).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-01-27 11:51 PM

Krista, Abrahm....congratulations.....I wish you the very best....

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-27-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-01-27 11:51 PM

Awwwwwww !
How wonderful to have each other !
Blessings sent to you both.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

emmalouise
Junior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 26

5 posted 2001-02-12 10:05 PM

While catching up on some of the back pages, I stumbled across this treasure, and decided that it just had to be brought up to the front again. It is beautiful, and it touched me deeply.

best,
emma

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

6 posted 2001-02-13 12:12 PM

This is the perfect Valentine. How kind of you to share it with us!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

7 posted 2001-02-13 04:25 PM

Is this the one that i wasn't supposed to tell about?? very nicely done.. very sweet. enjoyed it much.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

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