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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-01-27 09:31 PM





You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brillaint sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know.




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-27 09:35 PM


Only....indeed....

well done...

Mother_Earth
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2 posted 2001-01-27 09:39 PM


How very beautiful.  ME
KokoStewartKoomoa
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3 posted 2001-01-27 11:22 PM


thanks for the kind words and comments and take care!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-01-28 04:26 AM


KoKo~
'A life is changed in just an instant's time'

And the secret is in knowing that it's changed.
I so enjoy seeing musical metaphors working through a poem.
Beautiful job.
~*Marge*~


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Charisma
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5 posted 2001-01-29 05:41 PM


oh KoKo...how wonderful said.....loved reading this gem my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2001-01-29 07:46 PM


Now these words of yours are sure to leave some wonderful dreams.  Beautiful write.
KokoStewartKoomoa
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7 posted 2001-01-29 11:51 PM


thank you  Charisam and hugs back to you.
and thanks Mark, your thoughtful comments mean a lot to me .
aloha all my wonderful poet friends...

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



SEA
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with you
8 posted 2001-01-29 11:59 PM


Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful   -SEA
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