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I've Made Up My Mind
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I've Made Up My Mind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I've Made Up My Mind ~*Marge Tindal*~ For a heart this doesn't come easily but I thought that you should know I've made up my mind to love you so where, from here, do we go ? Across the mountains of the night moon slipping along the horizon I've made up my mind to love you long before the sun comes rising Settling into starlit sighs not wanting it to end I've made up my mind to love you past the chasm of 'just friend' Take this night I offer you tomorrow is written on the sun I've made up my mind to love you long before this night is done ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One fortunate person, he who would be loved by you.... liking this.... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very pretty, Marge! Denise |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wooooo hooooo you go girl! I loved this poem! and I hope it's a mutual feeling as well  aloha, KokoPassion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And a lovely decision it is...yes, indeed what a lucky man!  Take care, Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Once Marge has made up her mind...the fireworks start...hugs to you sis. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, yes, yes! Love is a decision. Well done, enjoyable piece! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ And I'm gonna tell him - you said so ! Denise~ Thank you, sweetie. KoKo~ Tee-Hee ... it will be, before this night is over ! Melissa~ *smiling* Martie~ LOL ! You DO know me well ! Me too, sis ! VAS~ And for a Libra - we don't make 'em quickly, But boy, oh boy - when we do ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge- I had to make my mind up about loving this poem. And it took me a real long second Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My ears are on standby!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ A slow-thinker, huh ? I like that ! Balladeer~ In hushed whispers of the night you will hear the soft refrain Of someone who loves you calling out your name *Winks* n' *Wide-Open Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Marge - This is great! I'll bet it's a cinch for him to make up his mind to love you back. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
And he will be the luckiest of men to have you! Wishing you joy!!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sweet and pretty Marge...nicely put. jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YOU GO GIRLIE GIRL!!!! play your hand ... take your stand ... get your man. very cool poem Margie gal ... love the attitude and anticipation. we will expect a full report in the morning.. but not too early *WINK* teehee  "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Okay well it's kinda tuff to come in here and post a response rite after sweet JM but I will say this Marge... I enjoyed this poem and like someone once said...if you like what is there and no harm is in the way then GO4IT what the heck...teehee |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I thank you kindly for taking the time to love me. This is a wonderful write well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Listening to a whispers name Once again having to reframe Silence spoken now and then Where the heck...have I been ============================ Go get him my friend...hope he knows just how lucky he is. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ I like that *cinch* ! PoetdeVine~ I'd be even luckier ! Thanks for your sincere wishes of joy ! JWesley~ Thank you kindly, sir. JanetMarie~ Ahhh, but my friend you should know me well - I'm NOT the kind to *kiss* and tell ! ! Well, twist my arm a little ! Dani~ You tickle me with your Tee-Hee ! JD~ Thank ya', dahling ! MarkB~ Right here in my heart ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a lucky man |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly fabulous. On the understanding that less is more I simply say Margie you go get him. Love this one dear heart I truly do Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Thanks, gal. Now I'm a'thinking I'm the lucky one ! Marsha~ Well ... Okay ! You're a doll ! *JanetMarie~ *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Marge, Great write,,, i feel the same way about the one i love..... sent it to her in email too for her to read.... Bernie |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Go Marge, go Marge.....Love the conviction in this one....Go get 'em.... Bonnie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, lady... he's a lucky guy! May you have much better fortune than I *G* For when I made up my mind, I failed to see The vote required a majority! LOL Sorry... couldn't resist... especially knowing you live in Florida. *G* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSlicker~ How sweet to know. I hope she likes it. Bonnie~ Going - going - gone ! Thanks, gal ! Suthern~ LOL ! But the fun is in the re-count ! You've spread a big grin this morning ! Have a great day ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
Beautiful Marge<> So lucky is some one<> Lovya <> Maiden |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Across the mountains of the night moon slipping along the horizon I've made up my mind to love you beautiful, beautiful. beautiful.....a divine picture of heart.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Once upon a time, I had a friend I wish I'd had the guts to say this to. I was always too afraid he'd say no. Wonderfully done Marge, I love it! -SEA |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Way to go Marge! I agree with everyone else, one lucky person indeed! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MySweetSoaringEagle~ Yes ... me ... loving you ! GreenEyes~ You say the nicest things ... and I thank you. SEA~ *sigh* EagleOne~ Thank you so much, hon. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-30-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Taking that chance on love...*sigh* thats what makes the world go round! Once again, You go girl! Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Thank you for the sweet reply, my friend. Isn't the merry-go-round of life wonderful ? ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
So? Did you tell him? What did he say? You can't leave us hanging?????? |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Wow! This hit's home!! I KNOW what you mean! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine ! Inquiring minds want to know - Discreet hearts don't tell ! Seraphin~ Isn't it a GRAND feeling ! ? ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, I've made up my mind that I love this, wonderful, enjoyed muches Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Thank you, sweetie ! You're a doll to say so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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