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Winter's Sonnet
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Winter's Sonnet |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Winter Sonnet Murmuring hollow wind of north cross across this field of yours through the winter scene be seen promising soon yon fields of green for snow now cast scenery white snow fairies have played the while casting about their sortilege right to bring forth these guileless smiles cumbrous laden each barren branch with cleansing crystals of frozen tear so there in the midst one stands staunch as if frozen with mercurial fear but break in winter's wind will cease and with the spring, again, to breathe 01.27.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I don't know much about sonnets Karilea, but this is beautiful! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Come on Spring!!! This is lovely, Karilea! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ A breath of spring in sonnet song~ Come now spring do not be long~ Rushing past the winter snow resting now in Sunshine's glow~ Love it ! Bring it on, lady fair ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent. . . a wonderful sonnet. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Lovely, perfectly penned! I can't wait until Sprng!Take care, Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautifully penned. I love winter and spring. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all...we are enjoying the snow now...mixed with ice, sleet, and intermittent rain... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's a beautiful word picture scene you have painted Karilea! As usual it's up to the high quality standards that I have come to realize that I'm going to read when I read done of your poetic works....ethome |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, This is truly beautiful, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart didn't I say you really suited sonnets, absolutely wonderful. Do I love this, yes I do, as you knew I would. Utterly fabulous. And that is as much as a critique I can give. (If it's not broken don't fix it, and it's definitely not broken) Thank you for another gem love Take care love as always Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you my friends....although I've been told of special rules to follow in sonnets, so please, disregard the word "sonnet" and continue to enjoy as a poem, and wait...just wait...I'll get the hang of a true sonnet yet...for I am no quitter!... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sunshine,...I read this once and then again aloud. How beautiful! What language! *Peace you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sonnet or no Sonnet....this poem paints a beautiful picture. Sometimes there are much more important things than sticking to rigid guidelines. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I aint familiar with sonnet too, but I know that I love these one....love it. Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you....but sometimes, rules make the work and sweat of a poem that much more precious....and one of these, y'all will have a precious sonnet just waiting for you to read.... perhaps I shall work on one this weekend... wish me luck! And thank you for your beautiful replies! |
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