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Robert Joseph
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since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

0 posted 2001-01-27 08:00 PM

Undressed

One by one
strands of black lace
fall in a flowering bundle
The rise of breath
exposing
revealing
spilling
soul's intents
to the basin of my
quiet waters
Desire undressed
in naked light
we purge
the unpure
Her tongue
writing our destiny
in a mark only she
can secure

Robert Joseph
~enb~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2001-01-27 08:53 PM

MMMMMMMMMMmmm hot !!! very nice. helen

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2001-01-27 08:58 PM

i can not think straight!
*smiling*
~eyn~

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

3 posted 2001-01-27 09:01 PM

Robert

One can only use their imagination on this one and end up with a great big smile. Nicely done.

Ariana

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-01-27 09:02 PM

Robert Joseph--This is laced with a few perfectly placed words...and sweetly sultry feel...very nice!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-01-27 11:02 PM

sure made me smile!

Kathleen

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-01-27 11:24 PM

Others see sultry, hot moments. I see mystery and eeriness. This is like a long, slender finger with a long, sharp nail beckoning one to come, to step into the darkness of the unknown.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-01-27 11:36 PM

ummm....may I just say... regardless of how it is read... that it pleased me.... immensely?...

YES of course I may...

thank you Robert!

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

8 posted 2001-01-28 09:49 AM

Helen
Neve
Ariana
Martie
Kathleen
Virginia
Sunrise

Thanks for your rewarding comments, this piece while brushed in sensuality, is expressing a communion of souls -- one man to one woman.

Robert Joseph

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-01-28 10:44 AM

Enjoyed Robert...always love your words

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2001-01-28 07:44 PM

very sensual....

hugs, g

"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

11 posted 2001-01-28 10:23 PM

Victoria, and ''g''

Thanks so much for reading, I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this piece.

Robert Joseph

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2001-01-28 10:32 PM

ummmmmmm.........yes

-SEA

Tammy16
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since 2000-11-26

Posts 21

13 posted 2001-01-28 11:08 PM

Robert......I'm melting....liked it lots....had to read several times and enjoyed each read.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

14 posted 2001-01-29 05:35 AM

SEA, Tammy...Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this ''union of souls.''

Robert Joseph

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

15 posted 2001-01-29 09:25 AM

  'tis a warm brush that touches thy
      canvassed words...one woman to one
      man...
      painted lovely as always

      Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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