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Wanting To Know You
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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”WANTING TO KNOW YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ A passion I have, but one that you can’t see, you don’t know that I exist, will it ever be? Romantic thoughts I have, but only can I dream, for some things are not, whatever they seem… I know of you, but it is only by sight, hope I’m not staring, else you’ll see my plight… Each day that goes by, caring more and more, will you ever recognize, that it’s you I adore? Might you be single, married, or I don’t know what, it doesn’t matter to me, for you have captured my heart… Give me one sign, but look not and say no, but you don’t say anything, so please let me know… My ears listen for you, and my eyes are aglow, I wonder if my humble self, should just say hello? And perhaps take, this one endearing chance, of one tender word from you, or an affectionate glance… Or should I continue, as I have over time, to steal a glimpse of you, making believe I’m a mime? But my loving thoughts believe, deep down inside, perhaps I should at least try, but I can’t really decide… I ask myself, “How do I say, that you are my adornment”, even with my timid heart being amorous, I am only silent? So please be aware of my fondness, perhaps you’ll never know, for I still can’t find the words to say, which I want to bestow… ~~~~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Lovely thoughts and tender words. Now, you are a man of many talents and write a beautiful pen, I am sure you can find the right words for that lovely lady! Ariana |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Bill..........just tell her...........you just never know. helen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ariana - Thank you once again for your gracious reply. And I thought I had the right words for that lady, but what happens if she.........? 1slick_lady - well, what I think that I will do is just tell her, but I don't know what to say!! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Bill, Wonderful writing here, you have captured the situation magnificently, you've told the world only one more person to tell, good luck friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ I've read you ... you know what to say, now just do it !  Nicely written is your quandry. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Enjoyable work, Bill...your words paint a picture easily seen. Robert Joseph |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love it Bill really love it! Reminds me of the old song. "You Don't Know Me" Great stuff! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
BCI - You're never at a loss for words... It's just getting them out that's the problem... You'll find a way - I have great faith in you..  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful emotions Bill...I know you can do it, you express yourself so well.. ~softsmiles Me "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ if ya dont take the risk, you will never know...you have written a heartfelt emotion, this is beautiful.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cerenity - I do thank you so much for this reply of yours. You are so very kind Cerenity. Marge - More powerful words could not be spoken. Thank you Marge. Robert Joseph - nice to see you, and thank you for reading this. ethome - thanks for saying how you felt about this writing. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Nan - You are one of the most gracious women that I know. What you said really did help. nakdthoughts - A'hhh, thank you so much for your comments. They mean a lot to me. Greeneyes - a risk never taken, is a risk lost. Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How often does fear of failure leave us stymied? *S* Might-have-been's are cold comfort... go for it! *S* Wonderful poem, Bill! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BC~ I know you'll find some beautiful, magical way to tell her and make her heart melt.......GO FOR IT!!! -SEA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - you are so right, fear does leave one stymied. Thanks for coming be and reading this writing of mine. vandana - thank you for stopping by, and I'm glad that you enjoyed this writing. SEA - your words of encouragement are most kind. Perhaps some magical way, h'mmm, I do like that. Thanks you SEA. |
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