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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-27 03:20 PM


I’m Bad


Don’t you see the danger of me?
I’m so devious and rather sneaky
You know I’m a treacherous soul
To betray confidences is my role
You don’t believe that I’m that bad
Believe it I make the devil look sad

For wickedness is what I do best
I’m so awful just forget the rest
If I were Goldilocks I’d break in
And Snow White I’d teach her to sin
Believe me when I fight it’s dirty
And oh my! See me when I’m flirty

I have no morals and I don’t care
And there’s nothing that I will share
I take delight in seeing you cry
And I take joy in stopping you fly
I’ll bind you in chains then I’ll go
And if anyone asks why I’ll say so!

I simply enjoy watching your pain
So much so that I’ll hurt you again
I just don’t give a damm or a hoot
On your heart I'll wipe my dirty boot
You think you’ve a chance of me
Oh dear me no I’d eat you for tea

I’m utterly ruthless I tempt and tease
Don’t try giving me a begging please
I’ll use you up and then spit you out
I’m not nice of that there’s no doubt
I don’t care what you think of me
I’m wicked and it’s what I like to be


Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 2001-01-27 03:24 PM


Yeah yeah yeah you big you bad you MEAN!!!!! and if anyone believes that I have some swampland in Florida...HAHAHA
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2 posted 2001-01-27 03:25 PM


Marsha! Marsha!  Marsha!

can I write one l like this!  Please!!!

Kathleen



Alan
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3 posted 2001-01-27 03:30 PM


Bring it on little girl
I can stand the heat
I like teased..
tie me up
and do as you please
Loved the poem...
enjoyed the thoughts it gave me

Marsha
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4 posted 2001-01-27 05:24 PM


Paula dear heart, I can be bad, well almost! I can if only I'd stop feeling sorry for anyone who hurts, even the slightest bit. I'd never pull it off would I. No Oh well, at least I tried, to show a tougher front.
Take care love
                 Mushy
                    
Kathleen love, yes love do, write it and then you can be as wicked as you like. Well as long as you like me only do it in your head. Because we can't do it for real, I know.
Take care love
                    Mushy
                      
Alan love, it did did it? Yes that's me, a wicked devil, who'll treat you mean, and laugh at it.
No love but some of the thoughts were pretty wicked.
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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5 posted 2001-01-27 11:22 PM


"There was a little girl
Who had a little curl
And when she was good, she was very good
And when she was bad. . . she was even better!!"


LOL  

Sorry Marsha. . . couldn't resist!!!

Wonderful!!

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6 posted 2001-01-27 11:37 PM


Marsha~
LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL


You ???
I don't think so !
Bet there's not a mean bone in that body -
You know - the one in the 'glitzy' dress ?

LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL-LOL


*Hugs* of delight !
~*Marge*~



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7 posted 2001-01-27 11:48 PM


You're such a wicked imp/angel...

we love it!

Marsha
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8 posted 2001-01-28 05:59 AM


Sven dear heart my versions better

There was a little girl
who had a mass of curls
all over her little head
When she was good,
she could raise the dead
And when she was bad she was
soooooo good she was fabulous  

Just a little wickedness coming out,  
Sorry dear heart I can resist anything except temptation.  
Thanks love
Take care as always love
               Mushy
                  
Margie girl, hi love   now my taste in dresses has always been bad, well I don't think they look bad just everyone else does.
Thank you love, it's true, I can't do bad, I can't even do slightly mean. But I do  a very nice line in wicked.  
Thanks love for everything
Take (tanka) care love
                   Mushy
                      
Kari dear heart, no I didn't think I'd be able to pull it off at all. But I just wanted the puckishness to peep out.

Thank you love as always
Take care
                 Me
(And I haven't done the storry yet I'm still trying )
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 2001-01-28 06:37 AM


After reading so many of your other poems, I find it hard to think of you as bad ... but I really enjoyed this one ... as bad as you make yourself out to be ... your warmth shines through

Marsha
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10 posted 2001-01-28 01:00 PM


Rex love, Thank you, no it's true I'm a wicked little baggage. No you're right I can't do the bad bit. But one day I'll be able too, if not be bad be a bit tougher. Thank you truly
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-02-04 12:48 PM


just like ole leroy brown aye...lol  "meaner than a junk yard dog!" (a little jim croce in my soul...   )

i cant help but love this one bubbles..!!  but believe it.....???  

dont hurt 'em too bad bubbly one..!  

hugs, g


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i hope i didnt wake you
but theres somethin i just gotta say--
i knew you'd understand..."
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12 posted 2001-02-04 01:43 AM


Marsha~

you bad? sorry hon but no dice. but i
really did enjoying seeing you ATTEMPT
at this side of yourself LOL. guess I
just know you too well   anyway loved
this nonetheless!

love ya,
amy  


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."


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13 posted 2001-02-04 01:58 AM


I love your BAD poem.. I's so bad it would be useless to critique it!  Now don't you believe a word I saying, I'm bad too!
Marsha
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14 posted 2001-02-04 09:39 AM


Dee dear heart, I know, but it was a good way of getting anything nasty out of me. No you all know me far to well I know, and thank you sweetie. Glad you liked it.  
I managed to get into this one but this will be the last time, there is definitely wrong with it. Because if i get in to reply I never see it again.
Take care love as always
                  Bubbles
                      
Amy love, you do know me far too well indeed. I really can't do mean and hard, I can't even do slightly bad. (But I can manage a little bit of puckish mischievous fun.
Thank you very muchly love
Take care love as always
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



doreen peri
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15 posted 2001-02-04 09:56 AM


awww c'mon! you're joshin'! hehe.... YOU???  

of course i know the voice in this poem isn't YOU, sweet marsha.... it's really cool that you can write a first person piece like this from such an opposite personality.....

i really love it... well done, my friend  

Marsha
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16 posted 2001-02-05 11:23 AM


Doreen love, It's true I can't do really bad, unless it's bad poetry   Thank you love I do mean that truly
Take care love as always
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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