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Wheel of Chaos
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Wheel of Chaos |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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 "Wheel of Chaos" Round and round they go...thoughts spinning, sometimes beyond my control, wishing to land upon those, more positive having a wonderful prize at the question's end. Landing on Need to Open Up More tried, but failed, once more... next spin Holding Onto Forever the answer... clinging to you as if a crutch (you think) I don't know others , how they are in relationships knowing only one real one, in my present past. Let me spin again... Knowing How to Satisfy I pass on this one... Maybe I am abnormal, but what is normal? Maybe I am childish, always in want. To be with you, hold onto every last second, knowing each time, you must walk away being freed from my emotions. spinning... Time to Change answer..how? my complection cannot change... my make up is ingrained, stamped on every line of thought, wrinkle of worry, look of intensity, every truth spoken and not hand on wheel turning... Extreme Games my answer, sensitivity how to react anymore to you or anyone else, when everything, words, silence, pain...loving... are felt truly, deeper than most, not just emotionally, but physically. one last try... Taking In Life With Each Deep Breath This one, the most chaotic spin of all.. When you kissed me hard held me tight, I couldn't breathe, but for my trust in you I gave you my tears, a mixture inside, churning in mold releasing in hold, the love that awaits reassurance that this wheel will come to a standstill, with you as it's prize. ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-27-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I think the wheel is rigged. Go ahead and spin again then reach out and grab the prize you want. Enjoyed reading your "Wheel of Chaos". |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very insightful read... |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
This is a different way to see life......as a wheel. Always changeing and ever going around to something different. Thoughful. ME |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
inot2B wouldn't it be nice if you could just grab what you want ...*smiling...thank you ~Wynter |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, I'm still here and reading, this really spoke to me!! Kathleen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunshine if you get any insight from this, please let me know ok? *s..mood swing time Mother_Earth...thoughtful, yes..different I don't know..this wheel is just my questions and non answers that swirl in my mind..driving me crazy some days... *s and Kathleen, yes sweetie, I noticed you are still here..and I for one am very glad..I have read several of yours..they almost break my heart..I just haven't had the words to respond to any poems posted lately..maybe I will be able to now... huggzzzzzzzzzz ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-27-2001).] |
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