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Turkish Delight
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Turkish Delight |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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We walk slowly along the pier hand in hand the wind bathes within the foam of the waves rolling like a shaggy dog in a gust of sand I watch your beard as the wind closely shaves my finger traces the scar upon your lip restraining, forcing myself to behave When you smile I like to see the little chip the chip upon the edge of your front tooth it leaves an imprint upon our pleasure trips Your skin sweet and dark as Italian vermouth cool to the touch in the pale moonlight as we skinny dip in our fountain of youth Ocean whispers sweetly as Turkish delight the moon is aglow, a pink rose tonight A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vic, For shame skinny dipping in the night. A lovely poem my dear. Sy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria I am trying to write a poem about desire and I can appreciate how you expressed the joys of a Turkish Delight...you see so much beauty in life...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sy and James..i am pleased you both enjoyed and thank you for peeking in today  Always so nice to hear from you ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
This is almost too HOT for this old lady to read!! But, 'ya know what, I like it SSSSSSHHHHHHH don't tell. ME |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love this. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you mother earth and poeminister..appreciate your comments today.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Love this little stroll of yours, Victoria. "...skin sweet and dark as Italian vermouth" Nice line. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you krawdad..Im so glad you enjoyed Thank you for reading ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Victoria: Sweet as Italian Vermouth and skinny dipping. You definitely are a romantic girl! I love it! Ariana |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Ariana..and for visiting ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh wow Victoria ~ What a stroll down the pier this is.... wonderful... Bonnie |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
yes, deliciously romantic.....you are the Queen! *S* Z |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Sweetness, tenderness, passion, romance, and a little bit of daring! What more can anyone ask?To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hi Bonnie..so nice to hear from you..im so pleased you enjoyed.. HUGSZyell...Oh my goodness..the queen haa..you are too kind dear friend..HUGS thanks for peeking in today ... kcsgrandma..Well i am so glad you enjoyed..always nice hearing from you HUGS... ~V~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, you paint with colors others would not stir...enchanting work. Robert Joseph |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now, that sounds like a fun night for sure...you know what I mean.....lovely poem indeed! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Robert and Ethome..So nice to hear your kind comments today...thank you very much for visiting. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Wow Vic......all I can say right now.  } |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for your wow haa..thanks for visiting Robt. Thank you Lauren..you snuck in when i wasnt looking haa..glad you enjoyed.. ~V~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wooohoooooo.... what a read....enjoyed ~V~Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'll tell you - whan you want to turn up the heat - you surely know how! |
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