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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-01-27 11:07 AM


You're Silent Today
~~~


Signal me goblin
your rainbow
tis arcing
Whisper your secrets aloft on the air
Speak to me goblin
respond to my whimper
Vainly I wish
o'er the trouble I fear
~
Your laugh
surely echoes
through valleys of treasure
Where beautiful flowers
so fragrant display
And bound where so often
I wander the heather
Though sadly I listen ...
you're silent today
~
And I want you back
~~~




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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-01-27 11:14 AM


Rex,
If this don't get her back nothing will. Nice writing.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-01-27 11:20 AM


This one likes me Rex....a lot!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-01-27 12:05 PM


Rex~
This contains such hauntingly lovely thoughts~

'And bound where so often
I wander the heather
Though sadly I listen ...
you're silent today'


Lovely.
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 2001-01-27 06:02 PM


I'll cross my fingers that she sees this and ends her silence. Well done sir.  
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
5 posted 2001-01-28 06:22 AM


Thankyou Seymour ... very kind of you

Sunshine ... so do we all

Thanks Marge ... I find it tough these days, to write anything happy ... this is just reaching out to my happy side ... that has lost its way

Thanks Sharon ... I hope your right

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6 posted 2001-01-28 02:40 PM


if only we could make people talk. . .

wonderful words Rex. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

jwesley
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7 posted 2001-01-28 02:57 PM


Words from the heart, my friend.  Surely she knows...hopefully it's enough.

Hang in there...

jwesley

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