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final warning |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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If there is nothing I can do... then slice my head off of my neck and put it, o-so-lovingly... as final warning of your trek... upon a stick, in midst of path, the danger that you'll never see... before you bite the fruit of tree, take you, one last look at me. |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Spooky images runnin all throughout your poem. Basking in your illusions as always, me |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
If this guy's cheating on you I think you should just walk away...there's always someone looking for a hot blooded passionate Louisiana Acadian poet woman full of desire and heart....just a thought...besides Celeste I couldn't bear to think of your head on a stick...it ain't right baby it just ain't right....ethome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! lol...not one, but two of me favorite men~! What's a poor hot blooded acadian girl gonna do? LOL...LOCK THE THREAD? DO YOU HEAR ME PEOPLE???? *they don't yanno* TSK....tsk...tsk.... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Now this is more like it!!! I see your spirit in this one. And I agree, your head on a stick is nothing I could imagine...but if I could, would it be like a Pez candy do you think? serenityPez? LOL |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Been there ... in a round about sort of way Only ... my head felt twisted off |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Heads up!!!!  Kathleen |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
My aren't we in a spelling mood. Picture a smiling head on a bamboo pole spitting at passers by. Great twist Serene Rich |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
If that's love, give me hate. Mike |
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