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stories, stories---evertold....
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stories, stories---evertold.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I do not--will not beg a tear... don't corner me-- I am the bear. As gentle, soothe as touch to touch, the moaning keening not enough... the simple whiteness of my eyes? should warn you, all aware, despise... Do not attempt to trap her in-- I'll fight my way out trapped again... Here I reside, deep in my woods, I chose a life where no path should ever happenstance my way... I claimed a cave, and here I stay... and tunnels dug beneath the stone... in winter, they have kept me warm. and summers? ferns grew cross the path... and saved me from my own rude wrath... I am, I am, a story, told, echoes of the stones of old... and every crag of blood's stronghold? A Demon meets me where I'm at. I am, I am, am all of that... stories--echoed...heart froze cold. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow great one. Loved the title, and loved the last two lines. Brought it all together nicely "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Read this three times...different images each and every read... Good job! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lots to this one, very deep. Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and the stories continue. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yes.... you are!!! all that and a really fine writer, y'know that? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This one goes right staright to the library...girl this is a pleasure to read the images are just superb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Saxoness...thanks so much for popping in, I do value your opinion muchly...much grat. Sunshine...and such is my life...don't mean to be so ambiguous...just had to learn to write my feelings in code--*wink* Kathleen, thank you much, lovely heart...hugs. sven...there's so many I can't even remember them all...thanks, for reading and your concern as well. I am well and appreciate your caring spirit. doreen...you always make me smile...what a gift of a friend you have been! Paula...it's only words, eh? love to you, dearheart...thanks. Thanks to all, and HUGS TO FORUM...serenity's insomnia begins...sigh... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ok, so while I'm reading, the tv has the discovery channel showing a Grizzly bear show.......good grief.......they go together perfectly........love this poem!!  -SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I agree with Paula, Tread to Library has been made. |
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