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Open Heart Sonnet |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME 
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I speak, my maiden coyness long forgot, My passion clearly laid before your view, Exposed my every feeling, all my thought, An open book awaiting your review. I sing my heart in sonnets soft and sweet. I whisper tender words into the air. I'm smiling, laughing, dancing down the street. I feel you all the time and everywhere. I've never understood the courtship rules. To me, the way I feel is not a game. If distance and pretense must be the tools In arts of love, I guess I'm doomed to shame. But if you want an open heart and true, Accept the gift I freely offer you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
kcsgrandma, truely lovely, open and honest. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I can see that you have a heart of gold. This is a beautiful open hearted write. God Bless Mr.Magoo |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ Lovely thoughts from your heart ... so open ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Kethry - Thank you.  I'm not much good at hiding what I feel.Mr. Magoo - I can see you are very kind. Thank you. Marge - Thank you. Maybe too open, but that's the way it is. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely kcsgrandma...HUGS...I love sonnets ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thank you, Victoria. I love HUGS!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautifully written... I enjoyed reading your sonnet... coco |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I believe I've just been sonnetized... well done! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely written. Liked muchly. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Coco - Thank you. Sunshine - Sonnetized??? Thanks.Mike - Muchas gracias. (Didn't want to keep repeating myself. )To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
open and honest heart.....ennjoyed reading these wonderful sonnet. Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A wonderful sonnet! Well expressed, I believe that many of us want this and offer our souls, yet, this is taken for granted the most. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kcsgrandma, Enjoyed reading this very much, you write well. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is truly heartwarming. Kathleen |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"I've never understood the courtship rules. To me, the way I feel is not a game." --------------------------------------- nope..dont like games... oh mar...we of good hearts...  open for the harsh reviews...lolgreat one..you know i love this one! hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Charisma - Thanks for the "wonderful" reply. Melissa - Yes, sometimes the offer is taken for granted, or rejected, and it hurts, but I think it's still worth risk, don't you? Thanks for reading. Seymour - Thank you very much. You are one of many here who inspire. Kathleen - Thank you. I am glad to have warmed the heart of such an exquisite poet. Gale - Thanks for your kind review. Sometimes they aren't so harsh after all. Keep that heart open. hugsTo love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
kcsgrandma - I can say this, "a lovely poem by a very lovely lady". BC |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
BC - And I can say "Thank you to a very kind gentleman." To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I don't think any man in his right mind could say no to that. Wonderful sonnet. I enjoyed it much. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Mark - Thank you. I do hope he's in his right mind then. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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