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Mystifying Green Eyes
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Mystifying Green Eyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“MYSTIFYING GREEN EYES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Eyes the color of soft emeralds, staring into blue, radiates into mine, a delicate and greenish hue… Captures all of my essence, inside and out, as I’m totally mesmerized, and there is no doubt… Your hair is like flaxen, as it slides through my fingers, and your lips gentle and soft, they are my abductors… These things only you can do, and when we combine, I feel this delightful chill, running up and down my spine… Eyes that hypnotize, drawing me only closer, and as you stare at me, my thoughts become the aggressor… They want me to touch you, as I’m in your trance, I’m under your control, and all it took was one glance… Green and blue compelling, an attractive combination, softer is their look, gazes loving between them… But when they both meet, strange things ensue, like when a witch, is conjuring up her magical brew… My weakness is you, and you have possessed me, your piercing eyes always stare, into mine affectionately… But one thing I know, I want no compromises, for it’s only you I desire, with your “Mystifying Green Eyes”... ~~~~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nicely done Bill...sensual and loving.... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words bill..nicely done as always  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My oh my this was indeed a treat to read... Enjoyed this PoetFriend thank you... Isn't it sweet how a glance into one's eyes can as u state 'hypnotize'... *~coco~* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Elizabeth, Thank you Liz, for stopping for a read. Sensual and loving is nice. Hi Victoria, Nice to see you, and thanks for the kind reply. Hi Coco, Thanks for the generous reply, and yes, a glance into one's eyes can hypnotize, as I well know. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill I once had a friend with green eyes and I understand how beautiful they really are. Your words are enchanting and tender. Ariana |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ That shade of green quite in between An invitation glanced to pastures of chance To gaze or graze in mesmerized haze Oh, to have been invited in ... to shades of green Well, just happens mine are green, Sooooooooo - I took sweet liberty with the inspiration ! *wink* Lovely thoughts, Bill. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey Marge, isn't it wonderful to have green eyes...the better to bewitch them with?... LOL... wonderful write, our Bill! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ariana - Sorry I haven't replied sooner, but duty was calling. Thanks for the sweet reply. Hi Marge, Nice poem you write in reply. Thank you, it's appreciated. And thanks for coming by. Sunshine - Yes, the green is bewitching, very much so. Thank you for coming by. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sorry to say, I have not much of the green, but I do have plenty that mystifies.....just teasin' ya, BC.. besides you know that for real *w ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Your emotions bleed through your words. Well done. AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mornin' Bill... Green and blue always did make the perfect combination, as they are doing here in this wonderful poem from your heart! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - yes, but the hazel, the hazel!And I do know about the mystifies. hehehe ATelamon - yes, they do bleed at times, perhaps many when writing. Thank you for coming by, and for the kind reply. Sunny - blue and green, what a combination! Thank you Sunny, from my heart. |
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