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Resolution Reborn
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Resolution Reborn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Putting on new glasses, Thought of a little kitten, after ages of darkness, revealing its vision Thought of a spring bud, after burying winter's hesitation, opening up to receive sunshine's warmth the world appeared clear, sharp, focussed i Resolved to live life with such undimmed clarity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The way we see the world, ourselves and others all depends on the vision we determine to have! You said so much in this well written little piece!  Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
So you really gave up on the contacts, eh? This is a great resolution, Kaile. Best of luck with it! Vision like that will turn a good poet into a great one.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And I hope you can hold to it...it might be hard though, we get over-exposed to things sometimes... lovely poem Kaile... K |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great thoughts here Kaile and I know you'll be living them.....good writing! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful verse. You are so right in what you have said. It is all on how we determine to look at the world that makes the difference. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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