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0 posted 2001-01-26 09:02 PM


Girl Of My Dreams
By: Noah Eaton

I dreamt that I was sauntering upon a marble pathway above the clouds on top of the world
The air was scented with easing scents of cinnamon, I could hear angels sing as the skies gathered up pearls
Then out upon the extent of the heavens, a vivid light begins to shine, slowly melting into a human-like form
I slowly fall to my knees as I stare up at the figure, and see a lovely face appear before me
The girl slowly paces toward me, as I kneel down on that marble walkaway, staring into her jewel eyes
Her body was adorned with a white dress as smooth as silk, decorated with sapphires and golden glitter
She had long hair, braided with the glitter of heaven’s dust, she was beautiful
She comes to me and says that she was the one, the true love of my life
She said that I was the fire of her heart, the one that she desired
She said that whenever it was dark and she was lost, I was the star that helped her find her way home
And she told me that she would be my love, and I knew that I was meant for her too
For she knew how I felt, and we both shared common feelings, hopes, and happiness
That’s when I raised myself up on the balls of my toes to embrace my lovers lips with my own
We locked lips as we began to feel ourselves floating high above the cirrus clouds
Then she planted her head on my shoulder, whispering sighs of love in my ear
It’s sweet, delightful voice poured down my ear into my heart like the smooth, comforting breeze of the springtime
Then I asked her when I may find her again
And she told me that I will find her soon enough as long as I follow my heart and dreams
And to find the magical quandary where the brighter end of the rainbow meets the land
Then as I accepted her advice, I saw her angel body morph into a beautiful cloud of diamond snow
The jewels of winter encircled me, they fell on me, they all felt soothing to me
I landed back on the marble walkaway, and I walked down the marble path to a gate of perpetual light
I met a mighty cloud mage with a maroon cape and vest decorated with chandeliers with edges of hearts and diamonds
He said he had sent me here to catch a glimpse of the girl of my dreams
For he was the Fortune Lord, and such visions he gives to everyone was what he loved to do
And he led me into the Gate Of Light, and on my way back home
I said that I will always love
The girl of my dreams
And that we will find each other, sometime soon!

Copyright 2000
Noah Eaton
9/7/00


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-26 09:07 PM


You have some mighty amazing dreams, Noah!! Beautiful!!

Denise

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2 posted 2001-01-28 01:45 PM


Nice dreams and an astounding ability to write of them...James
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3 posted 2001-01-28 01:57 PM


Wow, follow your dreams and when you wake I hope she's there for you.
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4 posted 2001-01-28 02:41 PM


I bet she is dreaming of you as well...dont worry with love like this inside your heart she cant be to far away
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5 posted 2001-01-28 03:14 PM


how you touched my heart with these wonderful dream.....truly loved it.

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6 posted 2001-01-28 03:53 PM


Noah, I believe this is a dream of everyones to find someone that speaks to their heart like you describe so elegantly in this writing. Beautiful job...Thanks for sharing.
Pixydust

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