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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-26 07:54 PM


Imagination

if my imagination were to flow
wonder, wonder, where it'd go
probably on to a surreal dream
where life is quiet, and possibly serene

IF

I were to be loved, as can be
with sweetness, light and melody
would I know, then, he be the one
that would, could, eclipse the sun?

IF

my imagination were to allow
that this love would come, somehow
would I know him through darkest night?
and that he was to be, Mr. Right?

IF

I were allowed to dream, I would ~
and imagine then that I could
make this man so pleased to be
in the midst of this, my company

and I imagine, thus, in this mist
just how he would then so kiss
and nothing would so ever compare
to these feelings that I would share

if

if there ever might be that one
who could do and say, and leave undone
all that was past, to see forward to we
then he would be as my imagination sees.

01.26.01


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2001-01-26 07:59 PM


Kari love, you know without me telling you that this is the utter best. So truly wonderful, and as always you present it perfectly. Beautiful work dear heart.
I love it, truly I do
Take care love as always
               Majestica Marsha
                      
        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
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2 posted 2001-01-26 08:02 PM


Sunshine...the beauty of imagination is that it can take us anywhere and, although I have never experienced it firsthand, they say sometimes dreams come true...may they for you  
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3 posted 2001-01-26 08:08 PM


Karilea--You dream a sweet dream...and write well too.
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4 posted 2001-01-26 08:15 PM


Karilea~
With your poetic imagination -
you can fly~  you can fly~

Hugs
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2001-01-26 08:26 PM


Very beautiful, Karilea!!  

Denise

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6 posted 2001-01-26 09:14 PM


(sigh) Oh yes, imagination is the greatest thing one can have, for it helps us see things beyond what we all see in reality. We create our own special characters and worlds, and dreams and ambitions. And this love you speak of, it's only a matter of time before you find the object of your affection touching reality. You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-01-26 09:20 PM


Oh boy, Sunshine made my day 2day...
Thank you PoetFriend for this write is one of the sweetest I have read...
Into my library it shall go...

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8 posted 2001-01-26 09:21 PM


Ooopsie, I forgot 2clic that library thread...

Sunshine
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9 posted 2001-01-27 06:30 AM


Marsha...you are always there to read, my friend, and you do my heart good...thank you!...

'Deer...some of us fight to dream...others fight the dream...yet, no one has taken my dreams away...I think I'll look forward to the day that some of them may come true...afterall, there IS a DisneyWorld, isn't there? {~,^}...

Martie, so glad you liked it, thank you!...

Marge, I'm clapping.... because I also believe but...YOU knew that!...{~,^}

Thank you O Poster/Reader/Poet of 15,000+ smiles...

Noah...exactly...where would all of the glories of mankind be if NOT for the dreamer?...

Coco...thank you...times Two!



Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




ethome
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10 posted 2001-01-27 06:38 AM


Wonderful imagintion of very possible happenings....good write Karilea....I hope these things come true for someone as their imagination envisions it....ethome
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11 posted 2001-01-28 02:16 PM


your dream = my dream
and
although I can't write with your imagination
If I could - I'd add:
your imagination = mine as well
(another Karilea post for my treasure box)

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