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Precious Moment
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Precious Moment |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
*~Precious Moment*~ At first I thought it was that time When eyes of green met eyes of brown And now upon relection shores I know it wasn't destiny of choice Today I stand with scars and tears The pain has settled and I'm free to breathe Remembering that precious moment When two conceived the ultimate blessing The gift of love shared between two Is fact of what we both held true Belief in love and all its strength Is what it takes to make or break Now the road of new begins Where two divide and co-exist Among songs of sparrow unheard before Melodious harmonies are now explored Within these arms each day of life This innocent child embraces mine And questions not of what you've done She simply gives and embraces love Forgiveness for the hurt you cause Is now the path I choose to walk And though I cannot accept your behaviour I shall indeed always remember That precious moment... forever treasured *~ coco ~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-26-2001).] |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
CocoBaci That precious moment... forever treasured Beautifully stated. Bernie |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sweetie this is so beautiful...learning to walk that path of forgiveness isnt easy I know...but its necessary I think before you are able to give your heart again We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Sometimes forgiving is the hardest thing to do. I guess what they say about what dont kill us will only make us stronger has some truth. The reason I say this is because if your able to forgive one who has hurt you once then you`ve already proved your strength. Best wishes. Mr.Magoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ You are just wonderful !  'Now the road of new begins Where two divide and co-exist Among songs of sparrow unheard before Melodious harmonies are now explored' Co-existing in the peace that forgiveness affords is to know the lyrics of the melodies to come. May you sing~ May you sing~ The happiness that forgiveness brings~ Holding that *~Precious Moment~* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a beautiful expression of your heart, Coco! Lovely writing! Denise |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Forgive my brevity but I'm in2 reading your poetry rite now and so I shall say... Thankyou PoetFriends Muaah on cheeks *~coco~* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Coco--It is so easy to forgive something that created such innocent beauty...how can you not...beautifully written! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
poetfriend coco. . . this is wonderful. . . simply beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Coco - You have written yourself well this evening. Nicely stated, and meaning to be taken. BC |
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