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watch the flame |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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being there with you in front of the fireplace would simply be bliss and you know how I feel about bliss and about you and if you're not sure watch the flame ------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven, this should stay at the top forever!!! Great writing, and a sheer pleasure to read!!  Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oooh, so much heat and devotion in so few words! Wowza, I love this, especially the ending - just perfect! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, this is utterly truly wonderful, I really love this, but then what phoenix doesn't. Absolutely beautiful, and such a perfect example of brevity, speaking volumes. Fabulous love truly this is ace Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven you have captured some romantic moments in those flames...James |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful, Sweet Poet Man!  Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The flame will always burn bright, because of a poet who will gaurd it with his heart. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, May your flame always remain burning brightly, and may it always light your way to even the most elusive dreams. This is beautiful... Much love, Elise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i gave a WOW as i read this and i am anxious to bump this to the top... beautiful work, sven |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a beauty, I could get lost in the fire, and feel the heat, all the way over to ice cold NH! Sandra |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, I like this... Great writing PoetFriend... |
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