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g_pimp82
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since 2001-01-18
Posts 3


0 posted 2001-01-26 12:25 PM


I hate you hate me
But what is the reason?
is it just because we were born of a different season?
if you stop and think
we are just the same
and still you hate my kind
cause there is no one else to blame.
why are you afraid to face the truth?
why are you afraid to see things as they are?
when the old amn stumbles out of the bar
what gives you the power to judge him?
what gives you the power to judge me?
you are no better than him, or me, or any of us
when i look around i see...
one world, one nation, one group of people.
and i see that we are all eqaul.
but when you look around, your view is different
because you are filled with hate.
you see...
many worlds, many nations, and many groups of people.
that you judge,that u hate.
you have no right!
so give up your fight.



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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-01-26 12:30 PM


"judge not lest ye be judged"... the word is spoken.... how very well said...

(are you really a pimp?)

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2001-01-26 01:13 PM



A very important message you penned ~ well written and from the heart. I hope that all gets the chance to read this~

    Welcome to Passions!    

Take care,
Melissa
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The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams





[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-26-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2001-01-26 03:15 PM


Welcome to PASSIONS!!!!  This was a very impactful poem to start with and I commend you on it.  Wonderful words spoken.  Too much of this and that going on in the world as it is without having to still see the archaic beliefs of judgement passed on.
star 15
Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26

4 posted 2001-01-26 09:31 PM


hey cool poem
very well said.
welcome to passions...
u will love it..

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2001-01-26 09:43 PM


great msg...  

welcome to passions!

hugs, g


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."


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