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Amature2
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0 posted 2001-01-25 09:23 PM



Event Horizon

In the vast Universe, deep in outer space
There are Black holes, where even light will erase
Event Horizon it called, the point of no return
All things around it drawn into its churn
Total absolute destruction
Including time disruption

Deep within our inner space it also exsists
Loves Event Horizon, which no one can resist
No one knows when it even starts
The point of no return within our hearts

In there sometimes there is also some destruction
Even time disruption
But in most cases, when it happens to us
We welcome it, and are willing to discuss
How it fills us with jubilation
Drawn into loves churn with great elation
How it bends our time continuum
And disrupts our thoughts curriculum

It's a wonderful feeling, yes it is
And just like the birds and bees
We will all experience our own version
Of The Point of no Return, of Loves Event Horizon


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2001-01-25 10:29 PM


Hey! I saw this movie!! LOL  
1slick_lady
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2 posted 2001-01-26 01:53 AM


Amature2.....this IS so beautiful........& what bliss the point of no return.  helen
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3 posted 2001-01-27 03:01 PM


Amature2, this is truly a beautiful poem.  Glad I stopped by to read it.  ME
Amature2
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4 posted 2001-01-28 12:43 PM


Thank you Poet deVine , cool movie   )

Thank you 1slick lady , glad you enjoyed it , the Point of no Return can be blissful.

Thank you for stoping by Mother Earth, this is a very nice place to read an feel what other are also feeling.

Thank you all, Amature2

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (edited 01-28-2001).]

insect
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5 posted 2001-01-29 11:23 PM


Great poem!
One day this poem will reach it’s Event Horizon!
But not now…. I’m returning it to the top page
Enjoyed the read
Now I’ve gotta see the movie!


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