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Corinne
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state of confusion

0 posted 2001-01-25 04:34 PM


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In the grocery store checkout
my five-year-old son plays a game
of move the can
from one side of the rubber divider
to the other.
An elderly woman behind him
finds this annoying,
grabs his hand,
places the can
back on our side.

The cashier's mouth moves,
silent words blocked
by the roar of rage.
I don’t tell the old ***** off,
I can’t speak.
The line lengthens,
the cashier demands his cash
I want her wrinkled neck.

Years later -
she still stalks my sleep,
I tell her off,
have her arrested,
run her down with my car
but she just won’t die.

© 2001 Corinne Bailey


© Copyright 2001 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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1 posted 2001-01-25 04:37 PM


Yes, I know exactly what you are feeling in this one, Corinne.

Kathleen



doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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Virginia
2 posted 2001-01-25 04:48 PM


excellent writing, corinne!! (as usual).... oh, and i think i know that old wrinkled witch only i met her at a gas station once... i've been trying to kill her for years, too.... let me ask you this? does she laugh at you? mine laughs at me.. very frustrating, to say the least....  
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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3 posted 2001-01-25 04:51 PM


Corrine, you need a new dream!  One of these days you might be the ol' ***** in that dream!
Aside from that, I do like dream poetry, wish I could do more of it.  Do some more, ok?
Krawdad

Corinne
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state of confusion
4 posted 2001-01-25 08:12 PM


Thank you all for your comments!

Corinne

Denise
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5 posted 2001-01-25 10:11 PM


I think the hardest thing to forgive, for a parent, is an insult or assault on one of our children. It won't be easy to do, I know, boy, do I know, but when you do is when the nightmare will end. Great expression Corinne!

Denise

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