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Iwritethepoems
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since 2001-01-21
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0 posted 2001-01-25 04:07 PM

I love him through infinity
when ocean tides once carried me
into his arms and there beyond
we once spent time til nothingness
he and I, forever blessed.

In his dark eyes I saw the sun
and every touch was strength undone
as lovers, we delighted in
each living kiss, undying end.



[This message has been edited by Iwritethepoems (edited 01-25-2001).]
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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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1 posted 2001-01-25 04:26 PM

absolutely lovely, perfect cadence, beautiful thoughts and imagery.... i'm glad to read there is a "forever blessed" for some people...  
Poet deVine
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2 posted 2001-01-25 10:18 PM

Beautiful! Sigh..is there such a thing? I guess so since you wrote so lovingly of it.  
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3 posted 2001-01-29 12:27 PM

Beautiful! *S*
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