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Fostering Déjà Vu’s
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Fostering Déjà Vu’s |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fostering Déjà Vu’s across the plains of planes thoughts roaming, fast as trains to come onto a whistle’s stop for a memory they would drop and you experience déjà vu walk into a grand old home know the corridors which to roam reach around a wall, touch a light switch it on, candelabra bright and you experience déjà vu look into an old man’s eyes where the pale blue may realize he’s looked at you in the past when your future was first cast and you experience déjà vu hear the voices on the wind think of grandparents once again in the light see visions long gone as you step forth, forward and on and you experience déjà vu when you look into a mirror seeing not you, but someone dearer in that very moment, it’s quite clear the me you see is quite near experiencing déjà vu when I hear your I love you and I experience the things you do even though we’ve never met for I’ve not been born, just yet experience déjà vu 01.25.01 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
OH Kari..this is gorgeous... love the verses with the one line placed between - well done hon  KStrokes of ink, words, dreams like Waking mountains make intimate conversations With my shadow From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Sunshine, i like this very much, especially "when i hear your i love you and experiance the things you do even though we've never met for I've not been born, just yet" experience Diju Vu very well written Sunshine. Amature2 |
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Iwritethepoems Junior Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 25 |
this is one cliche I adore, and I loved reading this!!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is an excellent piece ... enjoyed very much ... I experience Deja Vu quite often and also having written one called D'e J`a Vu ... I just had to see what you had to say on the subject ... fascinating |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So well put, K...I know just what you mean...and you just know how to say it. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine-- I like this muchly. Sometimes my whole life feels like deja vu. Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hear the voices on the wind think of grandparents once again in the light see visions long gone as you step forth, forward and on and you experience déjà vu when you look into a mirror seeing not you, but someone dearer in that very moment, it’s quite clear the me you see is quite near ====================== oh you knew Id be digging this one didnt ya .. well of course ya did ... must be ...DJV  very very cool write Sun ... very cool premise. "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I liiiiiked it. Melton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Little K...thank you so much for taking a moment to read this....glad you liked... Welcome to Passions, Amateur2...and thank you for picking out the lines you liked! That means a lot... IWTW...me too! thank you!... Rex, methinks it's time for a repost, or at least, point me in the right direction to read it, please!....thanks!.... Martie....heh heh....I knew you'd say that!...LOL...thank you!... Poeminister, lives can be like that, yes, they can!....thank you!.... JM...we just premise away, don't we? Thank you dear!... Thaaank you Melton!... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I pray you will be 'born' soon - I know the feeling - my dreams have been so surreal of late - I feel I know your thoughts precisely |
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