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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-01-25 03:14 PM


~Silly Girl~
~*~

The drum beats in a slow rhythm
pounding louder with each heartbeat
strumming the table at 3:00am
with fingers of aggravation
the race begins,
as round in circles you spin
going  nowhere in your mind,
beating your head against the wall
brings no end to your debate,
silly girl...
love can wait


BloomingRose


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-25 07:47 PM


Well, at least, for the right one! Very good Deb!

Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2001-01-25 07:52 PM


Now don't go doing any structural damage to the house!  Time and patience carries with it the peace of finding the right one.  I think you found that out already though so this isn't news to you. Nice write.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-01-25 10:14 PM


Ah...sometimes it can..but then again! Excellent read!  
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4 posted 2001-01-25 11:19 PM


Good things come to those who wait...
kcsgrandma
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5 posted 2001-01-25 11:54 PM


Sounds like a tough wait, even though it's worth it.  I can identify.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2001-01-26 09:28 AM


Sunshine~ Yes, for those that wait. That's often a tough one!


Mark~ Time and patience is the key. However, sometimes woman have little patience when it comes to the wait... lol

Poet~ yes, there's that then again thought...

Kcs~ Patience is a virtue, one I  was not born with, but have learned the hard way

Thank you all for reading *hugs*

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