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Sea Sponge of Passion
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Sea Sponge of Passion |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Moonlight peers softly through chantilly lace < !signature-->touching naked souls in nights embrace candlelight tangos, dancing with the moon shadows blossom, like a rose petal in bloom an exhibit of whispers blends in the dark across canvas of seduction passion embarks lavender breeze tiptoes across the moonlight ballet of whispers upon an easel of night succulent juices of jaded grapes invite moonlight fingers paint shadows' bare outlining the contour of love they share a sea sponge of passion soaks emotion two lovers upon the linen of devotion beneath the mosaic of a turquoise ocean A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ The beauty of the imagery in this piece is stunning. Really well done, poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria you write such beautiful poetry...makes me want to take you in my arms and soak you up...James |
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Iwritethepoems Junior Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 25 |
it's beautiful and passionate! very much! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Marge...thank you for your sweet comment...glad you enjoyed  james..you made me laugh with that comment james ha..thank you for peeking in iwritethe poems..thank you..and welcome to passions..nice to hear from you ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Images, images! oh my...my brain is full now of very tantalizing images...the mark of a good poem. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Spending much time reading and this is so sensual, Victoria!!!!!! Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Poetic Knight and Kathleen..it was so nice hearing from both of you..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I will echo everyone else and say, what excellent imagery! Very sensual write, Victoria! Love it!! sp Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you snowpants..I am pleased you enjoyed..and thank you for visiting HUGS~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mmm, so lovely, and my favorite scenario. Love this. Sandra |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ahhhhhhhhhhh sweet passion! This is beautiful. helen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sandra and helen..and for peeking in today HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
You sure have a way of making your writings very sensuous. You ever thought about writing romance novels? Beautifuly done. Mr.Magoo |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you..ive been writing one for some time now haa. maybe one of these days i will finish..you have just inspired me to get back where i left off ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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