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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida

0 posted 2001-01-25 10:10 AM


Don't Dispair
~*~
There's a time
there's a place
where all hearts go
to mend and become brand new
sparks of love seek your destiny
strength comes from winds of love
it's in the knowing
you are worth more than second best
more than the tail end of a falling star
more than love tossed about by sorrows in the night
don't fill the pot of gold with empty tears
grab the rainbow!
seek the higher calling of true love
not someones leftovers on a plate

BloomingRose



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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
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1 posted 2001-01-25 10:39 AM


Lovely, Blooming Rose.  Yes, not someone's leftovers, yet...what if someone tried to change fate by taking one's true love first?
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
2 posted 2001-01-25 10:45 AM


"seek the higher calling of true love
not someones leftovers on a plate"

*sigh* - good advice... there's nothing harder than being told you are the full course meal and finding out you're really thought of as just a stale snack.... but hey? lemme ask you? where does one go to "seek the higher calling of true love"? just curious...

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2001-01-25 12:11 PM


Vas~ If someone trys to change fate, then it was not meant to be. You can't lose what you never had in the first place.  

doreen~ Pray for wisdom. Follow your heart, if it's right you will know. Run from red flags, settle for nothing less than someones whole heart.


Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2001-01-25 02:36 PM


There is that darn left-overs and second best thing again.  Well, this write of yours is sure to dispell them for good I hope.  Wonderfully penned but even more wonderful is the insight and wisdom in this one.  Great work all the way.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-01-25 03:41 PM


I am learning to accept what is mine and to let go of that which I think is mine and is not...James
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