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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-01-25 04:12 AM

Melted into Angels Arms

When I was lying next to you
and looking into your eyes
I realized this man has never seen
anyone more beautiful my whole life.

Your eyes were so intense.
Your nose is my desire.
Your smile so sweet.
Your lips burn on fire.

My sweet you were
like an angel lying there.
A little piece of heaven
with beauty from heaven to share.

I found myself
surrendering to your charms.
Bathed in your beauty
as I melted into those angel arms.

Her eyes so intense.
Her nose my desire.
A smile so sweet as our eyes meet.
My lips to share that fire.

Jameslee@January24,2001
ForMySweetMichelle
onChineseNewYear

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-25-2001).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-01-25 04:59 AM

What a tender rendering of love...this is so touching...loved the repetition of key lines with that final twist too....

This is very touching.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-01-25 08:09 AM

lovely james..hope she is the one

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-01-25 08:23 AM

(sigh) Very romantic! Michelle is a very lucky girl, James, may you always melt with in her arms and may true love forever blossom in you! (sigh) Very lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

4 posted 2001-01-25 11:04 AM

I enjoyed this love poem very much, James. And I also hope and wish the best for you.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-01-25 03:43 PM

Thank you serenity, Victoria, Noah and Koko for the lovely remarks...James

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2001-01-25 10:20 PM

*sigh....Michelle is such a lucky girl...this is beautiful.

Happy Chinese New Year!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-01-26 02:11 PM

Thank you so much PoetDeVine...James

Mr.Magoo
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since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

8 posted 2001-01-26 02:28 PM

It sure is refreshing to see so much feeling expressed for another.
Im sure she`s a very lucky girl to have one who thinks so highly of her.
Very Nice and God Bless you both.
Mr.Magoo

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-01-28 01:48 PM

Thank you Mr. Magoo for your kind words...James

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-01-28 01:51 PM

James, you really know how to make the words sing my friend. . .

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-01-06 11:56 PM

Thank you Sven...James

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