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Said & Done |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Said and Done When all is finally said and done and the time for quiet passing has come if one person holds the key of me then I shall pass, content, happy… for this gift of life, and living compels me to gift, and in giving turn and smile, saying to you all along, you had these clues… for here is good, and here is bad right, wrong, happy, sad up, down, shallow, profound and everything comes back around do unto others, turn my cheek calm the wild, help the meek close my eyes, in faith to seek admire the strong, assist the weak and above all, honor the gifts that come in time of hope, to lift and turn none of them away but thank the Lord for these, today so if any of these, you might use all is yours, no cost, you choose for at my passing, I gift to thee a gift of faith in an eminent key 01.24.01 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, Sunshine.....the gift that you give us comes from your heart through these words!! This is truly a great gift, and one I shall read again and again!!  Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--To read your words with the heart is to find an open door. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, That is the most perfect example of your art ever. Utterly truly one of your best. Isn't it amazing what you can do while you're out to dinner, and someone has a laptop  And this is in between courses. Next it's dessert, chocolate mousse, Mmmmm.Almost as dreamy as this dear heart. Take care Majestic mousse eating Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very touching and inspiring, Karilea! Beautifully written! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Very ... reassuring ! 'and everything comes back around' Which is just what this one needs to do ! Rising back to the top ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You keep getting better and better! This is lovely.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and what a wonderful gift it is. . . thank you my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1, thank you for enjoying this little read... Martie, at least at my door, I'm not selling anything!...LOL...ding-dong, Avon calling.... Marsha, where's my mousse?...and you're taking a desktop out to dinner!? GIRL, get a life!...ROTFLMAO....thanks!... Denise, thanks for the beautiful!... Marge, you're always out there boosting everyone's spirits....in all ways....thank you!.... Thank you PdV... Sven....you know, don't you? {~,^}...thank you... |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a lovely piece of your heart Karilea ~ and what a very special key! Bonnie |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I sure love reading your poems. There are many beautiful poets in here but the first persons poems I look for are yours. No matter how my day has been your poems seem to bring me a bit of peace. Another very beautiful write. Mr.Magoo |
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