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“Inside Out”
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“Inside Out” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You come to me…I try to understand… I realize…our lives aren’t what we planned… You go your way…then I am left with mine… What can we say…when there’s so little time? So, here I sit…confused and lost in thought… Deciding what is truth and what is not… The only thing I know, without a doubt… Is that this crazy love just turns my poor heart Inside Out… When people love, they share a special place… Their world is seen upon the other’s face… And if the one can’t live up to the view… The other one is left without a clue… And so we sit…confused and lost in thought… We can’t decide if truth is what we sought… But we both know, one thing without a doubt… We’ve watched this crazy love just turn our poor hearts Inside Out… Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunny--Definitly, and turns brain inside out too! Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Poeminister ~~~ Yes, and it really is hard to get it right side out again!!!! Thanks, my friend!!  Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey Sunny1...good stuff here Sis! Glad to see you up and posting again...those gigs are rough, hey? Especially on your poetry time! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunny Inside out or outside in love's a good thing to be caught within You always write like a song |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Yeah, you hit that one right on target, but I try to combine the singing with the writing and it all works out ok eventually!! A girl's gotta pay dem bills!! Thanks!! ~~~ Martie ~~~ Hey, that's a great addition!! I guess I'm guilty of adding music to my writing 'cause that's what I do for work. Sometimes it's hard to turn off the melody that I hear when the poem is making itself known!! Thank you!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Inside out or outside in..... a heart thats true will allways win..... Peace< !signature--> ~ live and let live ~ [This message has been edited by bbent (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
lufrednow etirw ym retsis fo yrteop. ehT ylno melborp si taht evol si os htrow ti taht ew peek gnimoc kcab rof rehtona yrt. Loved it!!!  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Boy is this true..you've made it so clear...even if it is inside out... Hey!!! Meet me in the Mod Forum!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Sunny, inside out, how appropriate. Love this, it's from your heart, as always. Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
bbent, Yes....I do so agree, and thank you for stopping by to read!! Mark, Only you would have this wonderful kind of imagination and creativity!! Loved it, brother!! PdV, So glad that you liked this one, even if it is reversable!! OK...will go there.... Sandra, Yes....definitely from the ol' heart!! Thank you, my friend!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Great write Sunny1 ~ and oh, sooooo true! Bonnie |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Inside out upside down and backwards...I'm not sure its worth it LOL...great thoughts here me twin We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bonnie, Thank you, and I think we've all been there at one time or another!! Paula, Sometimes it doesn't seem like it is worth it, but later on you can draw from the lessons learned. Love is always worth it!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Oh how true this is. Im not sure which would be worse,being ran over or a broken heart? Im sure they are both very painful. Very Nice. Mr.Magoo |
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