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Bee
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23
Ireland

0 posted 2001-01-24 05:51 PM


Winter Of Love


Every sound is bursting with silence,
Hollow hands hold snow of emptiness.


Deaf dark nights hear nothing but
An imprisoned heartbeat
Caressed by cold feathers.

Pale blue skies miss clouds of pleasure,
Faded,
The rain of tears turns into deathdancing snowflakes.

Your voice, lingering,
Forever lost
In the wind of indifference.


Frail crystal future
Breaks under my feet
On the path of togetherness,
Where we once walked.

Mirror of faith on hardened lakes of intransigence
Requesting Amor's power
To melt and free
The enclosed blossom of longing.


Winter memories freeze laughter of joy
Forming ice patterns of beautiful moments
On the river of my passion.

Where once was warm breath
Gusty gales gamble with my ears.
Relentless, incessant, impulsive forces
Trying to shatter the castle of my hopes.


But through the opressive silence
Comes the soothing sound
Of your avowing heart...
Beat!

Distant but strong
Echoes of eternity.

True and sure
warrior against dullness.

Irrefutable
Like the river of your love
Breaking through mountains
Climbing hills
Overcoming obstacles
In the longing for deliverance
In reunion...
...with the awaiting sea.


© Copyright 2001 Bee - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-01-24 06:53 PM


Bee,
I loved this one, and if this is your first post, I am anxious to read more!!!!!  This painted Winter pictures, but added a splash of warmth with the heartbeat......great job!!


Follow your dreams...
Follow your heart...
Let them be your guides...
~~~ Sunny ~~~




Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-01-24 07:07 PM


What a wonderful first post with Passions! Sit back, relax, enjoy, read, write, and if you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact a moderator! And check your e-mail for a special message!
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3 posted 2001-01-24 08:43 PM


Bee~
Welcome to the wonderful world of passionate poets !
A lovely beginning and we'll look forward to more.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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4 posted 2001-01-24 08:47 PM


Welcome to Passions, Bee! This is a beautiful piece of writing!

Denise

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2001-01-24 09:30 PM


~Bee~

~Welcome to Passions~

This was a superb first post, I just loved it!

I look forward to more of your poems  

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
6 posted 2001-01-24 09:44 PM


Very nice, Bee and welcome to passions.  I'm fairly new, too.  Getting to know the fantastic and varied talent in this place.
Bee
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23
Ireland
7 posted 2001-01-25 11:14 AM


Thank you all for a very warm welcome and your encouraging words!
You seem to be a fine circle of poets....and a very big one compared to "all poets".
I am amazed at the enormous creativity.
I will try and relax, sit back, enjoy reading and writing and being inspired.

LOL Bee.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
8 posted 2001-01-25 11:16 AM


Warriors come out to plaa aaay
Warriors come out to plaa aaay

Distant but strong

I like your write yuh

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