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Please Contain Me
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Please Contain Me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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lost and fragile separated this I'm destined this I'm fated I'm a bad taste from your pain to be quenched with the rain raindrops matter mostly not so as do our reigning lives take them from my thirsting tongue I'll no longer will to thrive please release me into the air so that you may find me there please contain me into your past so that you may hope it lasts each falling raindrop from above is a symbol of my love the tears are shed they dry and reform come to me now I'll keep you warm the past recycles into anew lets not forget dear that I am you one last word one last goodbye I see a raindrop in your eye [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Yea... thanks alot Walt, now I'm going to cry. Way to kill my good mood. No seriously, this was a well done poem. I liked it and you expressed feeling very well in it. Take care.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Different from you - and very well-done. I like this and, for whatever reason, free-falling seems to fit you nicely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
very nice walt... sad.... last stanza says it all... "one last word one last goodbye I see a raindrop in your eye" thank you for posting this. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh doreen i saw your post seems we are the ole wavelength. thanky to the marge and effigy in the house. |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Listen here no goodbyes offered!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I never know what to expect when I open one of your poems... except excellence. *S* I like this one very much, Walt! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How romantic! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
i agree with suthern, your poems are so varied, but always good this one especially so |
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