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Open Poetry #12

Clock Chimes

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-01-24 01:13 AM

Clock Chimes
Virginia Salter

clock chimes
day’s begun
heavenward
greets the sun

morning kissed
with autumn’s dew
as I sit here
thinking, You

are much too far,
too far away
for me
to greet
this brand new day

in a manner
of pleasing smiles
until we meet
our reconcile

what might I say
what might I do
to heal the hurt
I’ve piled on you

and what will be
your recompense
to end the pain
break down the fence

soothe our souls
align our goals
a promise, a kiss
a hit, a miss

© September 22, 2000

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-24 06:53 AM

As I note dates of your poetry when first written, I imagine you going through your volumes, picking, choosing, dismissing one over another...

so I'm very glad you shared this!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-01-24 07:31 AM

Yes, you are correct. Although, I'm not very objective, so you're getting almost all of them. ;o}

I'm glad you liked this one, Sunshine, thanks!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-01-24 07:49 AM

nice one, Virginia..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-01-24 06:26 PM

I agree, nice one, Virginia.
(I should go dig up a dusty one, maybe.)

kraw

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