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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-01-24 12:43 PM



Bliss

Under soft sheets
our bodies meet in bliss
kiss upon kiss


Poeminister


© Copyright 2001 Kevin Rainbow - All Rights Reserved
KokoStewartKoomoa
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1 posted 2001-01-24 12:48 PM


wooo hoooooo!!! adored this!!!!!! yes!!!
and will there be a contiuation to follow?


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-01-24 12:48 PM



'Tis the best bliss of all, I just loved this!

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



kcsgrandma
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3 posted 2001-01-24 12:53 PM


Wow!   Nice senryu, very different from the ordinary!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-01-24 12:57 PM


PoeMinister~

Kiss upon kiss
Sigh meeting sigh
'Neath silken sheets
Sparks begin to fly


You've created sparks for sure with your little gem.
Thank you for sharing the inspiration.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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VAS
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5 posted 2001-01-24 12:58 PM


delightfully yummy!
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6 posted 2001-01-26 09:29 PM


you just summed up one of our deepest desires in very few words
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