Open Poetry #12 |
Bliss (senryu) |
Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Bliss Under soft sheets our bodies meet in bliss kiss upon kiss Poeminister |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wooo hoooooo!!! adored this!!!!!! yes!!! and will there be a contiuation to follow? Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
'Tis the best bliss of all, I just loved this! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Wow! Nice senryu, very different from the ordinary! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Kiss upon kiss Sigh meeting sigh 'Neath silken sheets Sparks begin to fly You've created sparks for sure with your little gem. Thank you for sharing the inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
delightfully yummy! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you just summed up one of our deepest desires in very few words |
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