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The Moon
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The Moon |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"The Moon" Powerful and white It stands out against The velvet black sky Fasincating and enchanting It follows me as I walk Upon the sandy shore The cool wet sand I adore High above my head I gaze At it out the window Of my bed Thoughts of the day Still running through my head I go to the window instead The moon so real to you and me For we see it's hidden beauty So many times in my life Has it amazed me The stars shine so perfectly Around it, almost like Their proud of it The curling fog hides it A little but Still I see the moon By: Lisa Kennedy |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
very nice SwEeTnSeXy18 Rich |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Some nice images, Lisa. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SS--Lovely write. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lisa~ beautiful write!! full of some lovely images. but then again i expect no less little sis... love ya, amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Spiked, VAS, Poeminister, and my wonderful Aimster: Thanks to all of you for reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Your so sweet Amy...your also good my fellow poet. Take care everyone! ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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